creatures

We are learning to write a story down with creatures

On Wednesday the 5th of June Romeo and his friend Sione decided to go for a swim at  Mission Bay . Romeo's  mum dropped them off and went back to cook them  some lunch so she went home and Romeo and Sione jumped in the water straight away. Romeo and Sione were swimming for 1 hour now, when they saw a  tail pop out, so they decided to check it out. Then they saw a  head pop out so Sione went closer for a look '"WOW!" its a mermaid' said Sione then Romeo came and look 'wow she looks beautiful with a rose in her hair and scales on her tale.. She wanted help so Romeo asked her if she needed help . So they put her in a boat and pushed her into the water she said thank you for your help and she said if you help a mermaid you get to have a wish so they said bye to her. Before when Romeo 'asked her what is your name' she replied and said 'Aquar'. So she swam as fast as she could and  waved goodbye and Romeo and Sione wished for some new things for their school Tamaki Primary.