I saw the beautiful moon, shiny stars also the shiny light and a dog crossing the grass, love hearts and my love land. When I saw fat nice yummy strawberries, I ate some of them. I also drank some water to wash it down, it was nice.
I touched the flowers, beautiful hearts and an old tree. It felt like it was going to break.
When I ate the strawberries, they felt nice. I also felt flowers, water, stars and love hearts.
I smelt strawberries, flowers, water, stars and also love hearts but the worst thing was the dog smell. It smelled like fish and dog pooh.
What I heard was a dog barking, stars falling like shooting stars and also amazing hearts and lovely people talking. It was beautiful.
AND THAT IS MY BEAUTIFUL PLACE.
You set out your writing in clear paragraphs Romeo. I can tell you used all 5 senses to describe your beautiful place. It sounds lovely. Well done.
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