I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mr Minton.
Wednesday, 23 November 2011
Saturday, 12 November 2011
My Beautiful Place
I saw the beautiful moon, shiny stars also the shiny light and a dog crossing the grass, love hearts and my love land. When I saw fat nice yummy strawberries, I ate some of them. I also drank some water to wash it down, it was nice.
I touched the flowers, beautiful hearts and an old tree. It felt like it was going to break.
When I ate the strawberries, they felt nice. I also felt flowers, water, stars and love hearts.
I smelt strawberries, flowers, water, stars and also love hearts but the worst thing was the dog smell. It smelled like fish and dog pooh.
What I heard was a dog barking, stars falling like shooting stars and also amazing hearts and lovely people talking. It was beautiful.
AND THAT IS MY BEAUTIFUL PLACE.
I touched the flowers, beautiful hearts and an old tree. It felt like it was going to break.
When I ate the strawberries, they felt nice. I also felt flowers, water, stars and love hearts.
I smelt strawberries, flowers, water, stars and also love hearts but the worst thing was the dog smell. It smelled like fish and dog pooh.
What I heard was a dog barking, stars falling like shooting stars and also amazing hearts and lovely people talking. It was beautiful.
AND THAT IS MY BEAUTIFUL PLACE.
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